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Unformatted text preview: Sedaris. In his essay I remember him jumping back and forth between different scenes or instances within the essay. At times it was confusing but overall it elicited more emotions and gave the essay more power. I, also, jumped between scenes between my mothers life and mine to display the similarities and connections between the narrator and other main character. In general, I used the idea of that essay to revise mine, but it is not completely the same....
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This note was uploaded on 02/15/2012 for the course ENGCMP 0200 taught by Professor Gillespie during the Fall '07 term at Pittsburgh.
- Fall '07