Unformatted text preview: the scenes. However, I was very glad to know my weakness and fix it to the right one. My classmates wrote that the essay was an overall good essay. I was glad to hear that the essay was very realistic and detailed. I also read it over and over again so that I do not have any mistakes in grammar Overall, the writing process helped me to develop a better essay in the end. Compared to my rough draft, my final essay has changed a little bit, but not whole lot in the story. I believe this essay was a challenge to me. Sincerely, Hyun Jun Chung...
View Full Document
- Fall '10
- Writing, English-language films, Professor King, Hyun Jun Chung