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Unformatted text preview: Smash Bros Melee. If you had explained what Melee meant I would have had a better understanding from the start what the game was about. But overall, nice flow and word choices. I really liked your beginning and conclusion, you seem very proud to like video games and that makes me proud of video games as well as I read it. I also kind of like how you made some sort of a comparison to playing physical games and a little allusion to what war would be like if you had a second chance after you were hit down in the conclusion. It was a great read and good luck with the edit!...
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This note was uploaded on 02/17/2012 for the course ENG 100 taught by Professor Ta during the Fall '10 term at Wisconsin.
- Fall '10