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Responces PG2 - Jessica Gimbel March 8 2011 English 100 Kai Carlson-Wee Becoming a Dancer Eshara Your paper was very well structured and flowed

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Jessica Gimbel March 8, 2011 English 100 Kai Carlson-Wee Becoming a Dancer Eshara, Your paper was very well structured and flowed really nicely. You had a clear point that you wanted to reach and you reached it effectively by the end of the paper. I liked how much emotion you invested in your paper and how much time you took to carefully word exactly how you felt. I could tell how passionate you are about dance and your word choice and sentence structure conveyed that passion. I enjoyed how each paragraph built on the one before it. You began by talking about how to learn the technique and then moved on to performing and working on how to perform for an audience. The last paragraph about dancing to move people connected your whole idea about how not everyone can call herself/himself a dancer. The whole essay made a lot of sense and there were few times I was confused about the ideas you were portraying. I was
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This note was uploaded on 02/17/2012 for the course ENG 100 taught by Professor Ta during the Fall '10 term at Wisconsin.

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Responces PG2 - Jessica Gimbel March 8 2011 English 100 Kai Carlson-Wee Becoming a Dancer Eshara Your paper was very well structured and flowed

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