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Axia College Material Appendix G Peer Review Checklist * What is the main point of this paper? To discuss liver cancer and treatments What is the greatest strength of this paper? I think the greatest strength is how the write spoke about cancer and treatment in the conclusion What material does not seem to fit the main point of the paper or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience? The introduction was quite confusing. Although, it was an ok way to begin the paper by introducing someone, but later came back and was writing as the person who passed away from cancer. I had to read and reread after I got to that part because I was a bit confused. Has the author sufficiently addressed counterarguments? Explain your answer. Yes, he did explain liver cancer and the positive and negatives far as the treatments. Where should the author add more details or examples? Explain your answer. I think the introduction should have been more details about the point of the paper, instead of introducing someone. The reader
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This note was uploaded on 02/29/2012 for the course GENERAL Gen105 taught by Professor Smith during the Summer '11 term at University of Phoenix.

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