Unit 4 Assignment - Unit 4 Assignment 1. Compare the...

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Unit 4 Assignment 1. Compare the draft's introduction with the revised version's introduction: Which introduction do you like best? Why? I like the revised one better because it drags you in more to what the writer is going to talk about. The original one was kind of bland to start with. 2. Evaluate the revised version's introduction: What part of it (if any) grabs the reader's interest? What could the writer add to the revised introduction to improve it? The T.V. show comparison to the topic would be what would grab the reader’s attention. The writer could possibly add a line or two about real life issues. 3. Compare the transitions between paragraphs in the rough and revised versions. For example, the phrase "Also, parents have to help kids develop responsible sexual values even though sex is everywhere" at the start of the third paragraph in the draft is different from the phrase at the start of the third paragraph in the revised version. Why do you think the writer focused on improving transitions? What is the purpose of transitions in an essay?
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This note was uploaded on 03/01/2012 for the course INFORMATIO ENG 110; C taught by Professor Genedseminars during the Fall '11 term at ECPI College of Technology.

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Unit 4 Assignment - Unit 4 Assignment 1. Compare the...

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