Incorporating Feedback - What feedback did you receive from...

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What feedback did you receive from your instructor? From the peer reviewer? From the Center for Writing Excellence? Explain how you will incorporate the feedback into your paper. How will this feedback improve your expository essay? What feedback did you choose not to include? Explain your answers I think the feedback I received from my instructor about my expository essay was constructive and helpful. I was told that I had good information and that I need to just put them into well established paragraphs. My peer review feedback was ok not real helpful .I didn’t really get as much as information or feedback as I thought I would. For example, one of the questions asks on the peer review form ”asks where in the writing do you think the writing is unclear or vague?" The response was I received “I think the writing was vague”. With no explanation as to where the writing was vague or how the writing was vague. There was another question that says where you think the author should add more details. The response was “I think the author should add more details on
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This note was uploaded on 03/06/2012 for the course ENGLISH sn34 taught by Professor Bonewell during the Spring '10 term at University of Phoenix.

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