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PART 3 WHERE AND WHY EXAMPLES Feminists in Turkey were not able to achieve the value focused objectives because the movement was not massive and popular. This was both because of the activists’ lack of effort and the inadequate conditions that affected the movement’s popularity. In Turkey most of the people do not know the actual meaning of feminism or do not think that it is necessary or important. Most of the people in Turkey misunderstand feminism, thinking that it supports the superiority of women, and it represents women who are against the traditions. This is one of the problems that feminists face, and which prevents the movement from spreading. Feminists in Turkey were not able to achieve the value focused objectives because the movement was not massive and popular . (Reference – an empirical statement that is presumably based on some sort of evidence) . This was both because of the activists’ lack of effort and also the inadequate conditions that affected the movement’s popularity . (Reference or argument – see following sentences; again, the causes should come form some sort of reliable study, not the writer’s mind) In Turkey most of the people do not know the actual meaning of feminism or do not think that it is necessary or important. Most of the people in Turkey misunderstand feminism, thinking that it supports the superiority of women, and it represents women who are against the traditions. (what evidence does the writer have for the opinions expressed in the last 2 sentences? Is it hearsay? the writer’s experience? The opinions are in the present tense with little hedging. If we are to take them seriously, they need to be backed up, probably by a reliable source.) This is one of the problems that feminists face, and which prevents the movement from spreading. ''Child pornography'' means any visual projection, including any photograph, film, video, picture, or computer program or computer-generated image or picture (whether made or produced by electronic, mechanical, or other means) that has content in which minors take part as sexual objects. Even the nudity of the minor is considered as child pornography in most countries’ laws. ''Child pornography'' means any visual projection, including any photograph, film, video, picture, or computer program or computer-generated image or picture (whether made
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or produced by electronic, mechanical, or other means) that has content in which minors take part as sexual objects (This sounds like a definition and as it stands, it is the author’s own. I think s/he would be better served by using a dictionary definition; if this is indeed a dictionary definition, then s/he has to say where it’s from ) Even the nudity of the minor is considered as child pornography in most countries’ laws. (like which ones? Sounds strange; does the writer include something like swimming in the nude for example?? Perhaps, once again, he can tell
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This note was uploaded on 03/16/2012 for the course FENS 101 taught by Professor Selçukerdem during the Fall '12 term at Sabancı University.

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