week 8 assignment 1 com156

week 8 assignment 1 com156 - Appendix J COM/156 Version 5...

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Appendix J COM/156 Version 5 1 Associate Level Material Appendix J Revision Analysis Feedback Received List the details provided in your feedback under each of the following categories. Revisions What changes you will make to revise your paper based on this feedback? Explain your answer. Example The instructor indicated that my research paper should not be written in first person. Example I will go through each page of my paper and remove the use of first person. I will rewrite each sentence properly in third person. I will also review the material in the Center for Writing Excellence that will help me better understand how to use third person correctly. Instructor Feedback 1. The instructor indicated what the purpose of the outline is, and why we do this step of the writing process. 2. My peers and my wife told me how important it is to develop an outline instead of skipping it. The purpose of the outline is to show the flow of your thought process, and also a way to help you remember
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