Week 8 Assignment 1 com101

Week 8 Assignment 1 com101 - There are many revision...

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There are many revision changes recommended by the Center for Writing Excellence. WritePoint is an automated system that recognizes errors in essays made by university students. I am thankful for this helpful service, and I do not know what I would do without it. I should not use “we”, “us”, or “our”. Using questions in my essay is not a good idea, rather I should provide answers. There is some improper grammar in a few sentences that needs to be fixed. I also should avoid using words like, “lots” or “a lot of”. Each topic sentence directly addresses the thesis as well as state the topic. I need to work on an effective closing that reinforces the main point on each paragraph. The essay is coherent, and it flows from beginning to end. I need to use strong transitions between sentences and paragraphs. The essay reflects on the evidence and explains its importance. The Plagiarism Checker revealed that there is a two percent similarity index. I wrote a sentence that defined amenities. The sentence was written word for word from Wikipedia, and it
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This note was uploaded on 03/17/2012 for the course ALL all taught by Professor All during the Spring '10 term at University of Phoenix.

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