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Guerrilla Group Culture 1 Welcome to WritePoint, the automated review system that recognizes errors most commonly made by university students in academic essays. The system embeds comments into your paper and suggests possible changes in grammar and style. Please evaluate each comment carefully to ensure that the suggested change is appropriate for your paper, but remember that your instructor's preferences for style and format prevail. You will also need to review your own citations and references since WritePoint capability in this area is limited. Thank you for using WritePoint. Guerrilla Group Culture Nicole Mills BUS/210 02/02-2011 Hari Widjaja
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Guerrilla Group Culture 2 Guerrilla Group Culture As a virtual assistant with Guerrilla Group, the associate’s job is what [rewrite the sentence to remove "is what"] they [Check pronoun agreement--if "they" refers to "associate" (or a singular subject), it should be singular, too (he or she) and perhaps require adjusting the following verb] make of it, since [Check word choice--"Since" is more precise in referring to time ("after that"); otherwise use "because"] the daily services are provide [The participle form of "provide" is "provided"] within their [Check pronoun agreement--if "their" refers to "associate" (or a singular subject), it should be singular, too (his or her)] own home. However, the following paragraphs will illustrate the Guerrilla Group’s business model, structure, and culture. Each element will contribute to the success of the company. With a clear vision of the company’s purpose and goals, we [Use "we," "us," or "our" to mean yourself and coauthors, not general humanity (or yourself and the reader)] will be more equipped [The passive voice is a form of "be" (will be) and a participle (equipped). Over-use of the passive voice can make paragraphs officious and tedious to
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