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Everywhere Assistant Business and SWOT Plan 1 Welcome to WritePoint, the automated review system that recognizes errors most commonly made by university students in academic essays. The system embeds comments into your paper and suggests possible changes in grammar and style. Please evaluate each comment carefully to ensure that the suggested change is appropriate for your paper, but remember that your instructor's preferences for style and format prevail. You will also need to review your own citations and references since WritePoint capability in this area is limited. Thank you for using WritePoint. Everywhere Assistant Business and SWOT Plan Nicole Mills BUS/210 1/23/2011 Hari Widjaja
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Everywhere Assistant Business and SWOT Plan 2 Everywhere Assistant Business and SWOT Plan Everywhere Assistant [A job title is not capitalized unless it is the first word in a sentence or associated with the name of a person or institution, e.g., Certified Public Accountant John Doe. If not, it is just a label, such as auto mechanic, nuclear physicist, fry cook, brain surgeon, professor, etc.] is a new start up virtual assistant company. The business is a sole proprietorship founded and operated by Sadie Clark. This company was formed [The passive voice is a form of "be" (was) and a participle (formed). Over-use of the passive voice can make paragraphs officious and tedious to read. Try to use the active voice most often; for example, passive voice = The paper was completed on time. Active voice = the student completed the paper on time--See Center for Writing Excellence > Tutorials & Guides > Grammar & Writing Guides > Active & passive voice] for the purpose of providing a distinct service for busy executives, established individuals, and nonprofit agencies around the globe. Offering a low cost option for businesses on a strict budget, or for those that would like [The subjunctive is correctly used to express an habitual or conditional action but not to hedge. State it plainly--"that want"] to maximize their marketing and payroll dollars. I chose this particular business plan because it is relatively close in nature [Vague wording--unless the intended meaning is "in the forest," "in nature" communicates very little and can be deleted with no change in meaning] to the company that I have considered to start and thought this plan would provide great [Clearer writing suggestion--"great" is an overworked word, too frequently seen, and too vague. It has too many meanings: huge, superior, numerous, etc. Besides "much," a "great deal" can mean an excellent transaction. Use a more specific adjective]
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This note was uploaded on 03/25/2012 for the course BUSINESS 200 taught by Professor Unknown during the Fall '11 term at University of Phoenix.

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