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Welcome to WritePoint, the automated review system that recognizes errors most commonly made by university students in academic essays. The system embeds comments into your paper and suggests possible changes in grammar and style. Please evaluate each comment carefully to ensure that the suggested change is appropriate for your paper, but remember that your instructor's preferences for style and format prevail. You will also need to review your own citations and references since WritePoint capability in this area is limited. Thank you for using WritePoint. Many subscribers of The Daily Tribune have expressed their deep concern about global warming. The main point of this article is to address the issue of climate change. There are ["There are" is an awkward phrase if "there" is not clearly a location] people that [Check word usage--If this word refers to a human being, people are never "that" or "which," they are "who"] believe that global warming the most pressing issue of today’s society. Then there is the climate skeptic that remains on the fence post in regard to the issue. This person does not pretend to be an expert, they [Check pronoun agreement--if "they" refers to "person" (or a singular subject), it should be singular, too (he or she) and perhaps require adjusting the following verb] simply ask scientific questions. The skeptic strives for energy independence for the betterment of society whether climate change is a real [Clearer writing suggestion--"real" or "really" means "existing in actuality"--it adds little to the meaning (and using it to mean "big," "very," or "genuine" is slang); replace it with a more expressive word] threat or debunked completely, seeing the positive side affects that the United States would benefit greatly from. The other is the climate denier, who is in complete denial over climate change issues. A denier disregards all precautions and developments made in the path
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This note was uploaded on 03/25/2012 for the course BUSINESS 200 taught by Professor Unknown during the Fall '11 term at University of Phoenix.

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