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Unformatted text preview: making the best choice for your needs at the best possible cost. 5 After your computer and its software arrive, all your future software purchases should be channeled through SDD. 6 To actually make your initial purchase, a written proposal and a purchase request form must be presented to SDD for approval. 7 A need for the purchase must be established; benefits that you expect to derive resulting from its purchase must be analyzed and presented, and an itemized statement of all costs must be submitted. 8 By following these new procedures, coordinated purchasing benefits will be realized by all employees. 9 I may be reached at X466 if you have any questions. Sentence # Too Long Passive Voice Dangl. Modifier 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 Note: Every sentence contains at least one error; some sentences contain two or three errors. Paragraph # Too Long Not Unified 1 2...
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- Fall '11
- Passive voice, Personal computer, Word processor, southeast division employees, Southeast Division