7.2 Activity 6.10 - Your Task: Revise the following message...

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Your Task : Revise the following message to remedy flabby expressions, long lead-ins, there is/are fillers, trite business expressions, clichés, slang, buried verbs, lack of parallelism, and general wordiness. Look for ways to improve readability with bulleted or numbered points. Each student must complete his or her own memo assignment; copying passages from other students or other sources--or allowing someone else to copy--is not allowed. When you complete your revision, please “cut” (delete) the instruction page (this page). Submit your assignment to turnitin.com (“Activity 6.10”) before the end of class today . September 6, 2011 Mr. Michael Chatham 329 Sycamore Street Pikeville, KY 41605 Dear Mr. Chatham: This is to inform you that we are changing your World Bank Credit Card agreement. These changes will be effective for all billing periods that will be beginning on or after the date of February 3. First, we want to tell you about the change in how the calculation of your APR is done.
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This note was uploaded on 03/27/2012 for the course MGMT 3315 taught by Professor Myers during the Fall '11 term at Texas A&M University, Corpus Christi.

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7.2 Activity 6.10 - Your Task: Revise the following message...

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