7.5 Activity 6.1 - Activity 6.1 Document for Analysis:...

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Activity 6.1 Document for Analysis: Poorly Written E-Mail Message The following message suffers from a number of weaknesses discussed in this chapter. Your Task : Revise the message below to avoid long lead-ins, fillers, redundancies, wordy compound prepositions, verbs converted to nouns, trite expressions, and general wordiness. Look for four points that could function as bullet points with category headings (see page 155 in the course textbook for example). Each student must complete his or her own memo assignment; copying passages from other students or other sources--or allowing someone else to copy--is not allowed. When you complete your revision, please “cut” (delete) the instruction page (this page). Submit your assignment to turnitin.com (“Activity 6.1”) before the end of class today .
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TO: Jodi Jameson <jjameson@datamine.com> FROM: Fausto Amato <famato@datamine.com> DATE: March 20, 2009 SUBJECT: Avoiding a PowerPoint Slumber Party Jodi, I am writing this message because, pursuant to your request, I attended a seminar about the use
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7.5 Activity 6.1 - Activity 6.1 Document for Analysis:...

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