Unformatted text preview: of details. If allowed to revise my paper, I would focus on making my “so what” more evident throughout my narrative. Scars are physical evidence of things that we have been through. The idea is that my scar is symbolic of that incident. I’m also not sure how I feel about all of the dialogue anymore. It might better keep a reader’s attention if I left that stuff out....
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- Spring '08
- English-language films, 90 percent, Kimbra Ussery