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Axia College Material Appendix F Healthy Interpersonal Relationships Worksheet Use your [Eliminate second person (you, your) in academic documents and avoid addressing the reader directly. Use third-person pronouns (he, she, it, they)] textbook to answer the following questions. You [second person] are not required to respond in essay format. You [second person] may use short-answer responses, including lists, to answer these questions. 1. What are the characteristics of intimate relationships? [Unless in a quote or a title, avoid rhetorical questions in academic writing] What are behavioral interdependence, need fulfillment, emotional attachment, and emotional availability? Why is each important in relationship development? The characteristics if an intimate relationships are: [Because the preceding words indicate that a series or "answer" follows, remove colon] Behavioral Interdependence: when one influences another with what they [If "they" refers back to "one," it should be "one" also (and perhaps adjust the verb)] want to do and can do. This is important in a relationship because it is a mutual influence and bond. Need Fulfillment: the need for Intimacy, social integration , Nurturance, Assistance, and Affirmation. In order to [Clear writing suggestion--the meaning will be the same (and less wordy) by removing "in order"] have a healthy relationship development you [Place comma before this word if this is the end of the introductory phrase (beginning with "In")] [second person] need to have your [second person] needs fulfilled. Emotional attachment: all needs are fulfilled [The passive voice is a form of "be" (are) and a participle (fulfilled). Over-use of the passive voice can make paragraphs officious and tedious to read. Try to use the active voice most often; for example, passive voice = The paper was completed on time. Active voice = the student completed the paper on time--See Center for
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This note was uploaded on 04/05/2012 for the course EDUCATION ETH 125 taught by Professor Hoge during the Spring '12 term at University of Phoenix.

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