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There is an ongoing debate regarding the issue of free music and its value . Some hold their position that says music’s values have decreased since they are plentiful and readily available. On the other hand, others insist that the wide availability to listen to music has increased our appreciation of music . As for me, however, I believe that the value of the music is remained the same yet music is competing with many other kinds of inexpensive entertainment. --> 그대로ㄱㄱ To begin with, the first perspective espouses the view that since there are abundant amount of music available, the value of music has been diluted. To some extent this perspective is true. For example, there are abundant amount of music available nowadays. Globalization had helped the interaction of music all over the world. We now can listen to any kind of music we want. 일부 맞는 부분을 말하는 것 Nevertheless, I believe that rest of the idea is far from the truth. Particularly the part in which it says value of music has descended. The value of music is constant. It is true that the sources of music have increased, yet the number of the listener also has ascended greatly. Since the ratio of supplier and consumer didn’t change, the value remains the same. --> 틀린 부 분 후드려까기 While the third perspective seems valid in many areas of society, it is actually misunderstood by the majority of the people. The reason people feel this idea is correct is due to increasing numbers of listener. The huge number of listener made it seemed that the appreciation of music increased. Despite appearances, there is huge flaw in this viewpoint. It only considered the listener. In other words, the enhancing number of publishers is ignored in this idea. Professor Lee, highly respected and well-known professor at Seoul National University, points out that the basic way to determine the appreciation is to look at the ratio of supplier and consumer. Regarding this statement of Professor Lee because ratio remained the same appreciation remained the same.-->point 이해 못해서 심각한 개소리됨 As seen in the previous passages there are both right and wrong in the two viewpoints. However, it is important to consider all sides and realize that the most appropriate perspective is the second one. For the most part it is undeniable that ----------------------------------- This idea could be greatly sustained by various reasons. The most definite reason is that--------------------- For sure ----- is the most befitted answer for the ------- issue. Some may still contend that-------. Yet as above paragraphs clearly presents that the evidence strongly points to the #perspective; it is readily evident that the answer for the issue X is Y.

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