Kevin Collazos Cierra Clarke Peer Review ●The essay is well written, and does feel coherent. It has an intro body andconclusion and it doesn’t exceed the 3 pages. ●There are some quotation mistakes for example when you quoted “in fact, nowhite community… no white people.” then did not follow it up with the propercitation. ●I am a little confused about what you are trying to argue. This is because in theintroduction you talk about how you agree with Baldwin, and why he is correct,but then in the 3rd paragraph you ask “I am lead to ask the question, who iswhite and what makes a person white?” Also it should be led and not lead. ●There are also a couple of grammatical errors in the essay, like I stated before,
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- Fall '19
- Writing, Debut albums
