Personal_Oral_Essay_Meranda B_ edit.doc - Personal Oral Essay Peer Edit Sheet Writer\u2019s Name Meranda B Editor\u2019s Name Abdul Moiz Read the essay

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Personal Oral Essay: Peer Edit Sheet Writer’s Name: Meranda B Editor’s Name: Abdul Moiz
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Read the essay through from start to finish. Does the essay have an effective introduction that makes you want to read more? Does the writer clearly state his/her belief in the introduction (either at the beginning or end)? Does the writer use appropriate language given the general nature of the audience? (Too complex will alienate the audience–but so will language that is too casual) Does the writer tell a story from his or her own life to illustrate the belief? Is there good focus throughout the essay? (or does it make you forget what the writer’s belief statement was?) Does the essay conclude by explaining how the experience has helped him/her develop this belief? Yes Somewhat No Yes Somewhat No Yes Somewhat No Yes Somewhat No Yes Somewhat No Yes Somewhat No Strengths: Identify one strength in this essay. Please make sure you refer to the list of criteria you developed for an effective personal narrative essay:
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