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oliver analysis - Gupta 1 Ankur Gupta Professor Marconi PWR...

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Gupta 1 Ankur Gupta Professor Marconi PWR 1- Section 25 23 November 2004 Literary Analysis Dear Oliver, It was a pleasure to read your research paper about metaphor in tuberculosis. I found it particularly fascinating and I am a big fan of the approach you took and the way you structured your analysis. In fact, I was so intrigued by this paper that I feel compelled to give you a chronological analysis of your paper. First off, you had a pretty good introduction. I think you introduced the concept of the plague metaphor nicely but perhaps you could really catch the audience’s attention if you used the 137 million statistic in the very first sentence- just a suggestion, otherwise its functional and is quite informative. Your second and third paragraphs seem a little weak by themselves. I think you might be able to combine them into a stronger paragraph as one. Regardless, I still enjoyed the information you provided in both these paragraphs in preparing us for your thesis. Speaking of theses, yours was great. It was a tad bit long but I think that is up to
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