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Unformatted text preview: en our housekeeping inspector and
the maintenance engineer. All we knew was that the door
was off the hinges when it was inspected by Sally Tarnley.
You know that our policy states that if anything is wrong
with the apartment, we keep the deposit. We had no way of
knowing that George just hadn’t gotten around to replacing
But we have good news. We approved the deposit
refund, which will be mailed to you from our home office in
Teaneck, New Jersey. I’m not sure how long that will take,
however. If you don’t receive the check by the end of next
month, give me a call.
Next time, it’s really a good idea to stay with your
apartment until it’s inspected as stipulated in your lease
agreement. That way, you’ll be sure to receive your refund
when you expect it. Hope you have a good summer. C/M/Y/K DESIGN SERVICES OF M09_BOVE5352_09_SE_C08.QXD 5/17/07 12:59 PM Page 239 C HAPTER 8 8.2 Revising Messages: Directness and Conciseness Rewrite
the following sentences so that they are direct and concise.
If necessary, break your answer into two sentences.
a. We wanted to invite you to our spec...
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