ap06_sg_english lit_form_b

Their arguments are clear but the writing does not

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Unformatted text preview: the best essays. References to the text may be fewer or less aptly chosen, and they are sometimes briefer or less incisive. Their arguments are clear, but the writing does not show the same maturity or control as the 9–8 essays. 5 These essays are characterized by superficiality. They refer to a physical journey and discuss its significance, but they lack sufficient depth or development. They may rely on unsubstantiated generalization or plot summary. They may choose a less appropriate work or fail to explain the journey’s significance sufficiently. While accurate in a general way, these essays may be marred by unsophisticated thinking or immature writing. 4–3 These lower-half essays reveal incomplete or oversimplified understanding of the work or discuss an inappropriate journey in it. They may fail to link the journey to the work as a whole or may distort the idea of a journey to fit something that isn’t one. Their assertions may be implausible, irrelevant, or simply mistaken. They may rely almost entire...
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