Generally essays scored a 9 reveal more sophisticated

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Unformatted text preview: parent in writing that is clear, precise, and effectively organized. Generally, essays scored a 9 reveal more sophisticated analysis and more effective control of language than those scored an 8. 7–6 These essays offer a reasonable analysis of how the author uses literary devices to characterize Arun’s experience. They reveal a sustained, competent reading of the passage, with attention to devices such as point of view, selection of detail, syntax, characterization, diction, and tone. Although these essays may not be error-free and may be less perceptive or less convincing than those in the 9–8 range, their ideas are presented with clarity and control and refer to the text for support. Generally, essays scored a 7 present better-developed analysis and more consistent command of the elements of effective composition than do those scored a 6. 5 These essays respond to the assigned task with a plausible reading of the passage but tend to be superficial or undeveloped in their treatment of how the author uses literary techniques to characterize Arun’s experience. While exhibiting some analysis of the passage, implicit or explicit, the discussion of how literary devices contribute to Arun’s experience may be slight, and support from the passage may be thin or tend toward paraphrase. Although these essays demonstrate adequate control of language, they may be marred by surface errors. Generally, essays scored a 5 lack the more effective organization and the more sustained development characteristic of those that received 7–6 points. 4–3 These essays offer a less than thorough understanding of the task or a less than adequate treatment of how the author uses literary devices to characterize Arun’s experience. Often relying on plot summary or paraphrase, they may fail to articulate a convincing basis for understanding situation and character, or they may misread the passage. These responses may be characterized by an unfocused or repetitive presentation of ideas, an absence of textual support, or an accumulation of errors. Generally, essays...
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This note was uploaded on 07/07/2013 for the course ENG AP taught by Professor Mrs.liang during the Fall '11 term at Benjamin N Cardozo High School.

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