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2The Perfect RelationshipThis essay does not have a strong thesis in the last sentence of the first paragraph.Although this sentence is unlikely too long, the writer validates why we should create arelationship with books. Therefore, we are attracted to want to read the entire piece. However, itemploys a lot of creativity and fair use of language to make the reader want to read more. Anexample of this is in the sentence, "Although steady as a beating heart, books also give usfreedom; not just to go other places but to be other people". The language is not straightforward,which could make the reader get bored.Another strong point with this reading is the writer's use of facts, which they present astopic sentences for each paragraph. Therefore, each first line of a paragraph is a topic sentencethat explains why we should create a relationship with books.There are a few grammatical errors, such as the following.

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Term
Summer
Professor
Haranga
Tags
Writing, Grammar, Writer, Asperger syndrome

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