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Unformatted text preview: The peer review allowed me to get rid of some redundancies that I would have not thought twice about. This essay has strong language and vivid descriptions. I think this paper could use some more planning and forethought. I could use some more grammatical focus....
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This note was uploaded on 04/07/2008 for the course ENGL 101 taught by Professor Mahar during the Fall '06 term at St. John Fisher College.
- Fall '06