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Unformatted text preview: similar they are to one another. 2. Where in the writing process could you have caught your errors? Grammar-wise, I made two stupid mistakes. I could have reworded and attributed more ideas to the paper in the editing. 3.What would you have done differently if given the chance to rewrite the paper? I would try to lead the reader better to the conclusion. I would also add more examples....
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This essay was uploaded on 04/08/2008 for the course HIST 1432 taught by Professor Kane during the Spring '08 term at Pittsburgh.
- Spring '08