Improving Sentence Structure

If you have dierent ideas people have the thought you

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Unformatted text preview: planning comes first. “come to the conclusion that” = “conclude” “become a par1cipant in” = “par1cipate” “come to the realiza1on that” = “realize” Wri1ng Concisely Noun- based style Everything today has the requirement of the conformity of people to some standard. There is the requirement to be similar in their speech and in their beliefs. If you have different ideas, people have the thought you are odd. Our fear stops the expression of our thoughts about our surroundings. We must have a resemblance to our neighbours or friends. Because there is so li@le we can do to be individuals, it is my thought that we would commit an error by the imposi1on of a dress standard on students. It would be a loss to their expression of individuality. (100 words) Verb- based style Everything today requires people conform to some standard. Similarity is required in how they speak and what they believe. If your ideas differ, people think you are odd. We fear expressing what we think about our surroundings. We must resemble our neighbours or friends. Because there is so li@le we can do to be individuals, I think we would err by imposing a dress standard on stud...
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