Business Communication, Visual Analysis Assignment

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Art and Wine With a Rose www.artandwinewitharose.com Margaret’L.’Rose ’ 439’Madison’Ave. ’ Grosse’Pointe’Farms,’MI 48236’ Dear’Ms.’Rose,’ Congratulations’on’your’new’business:’After’25’years’of’teaching’art’in’your’local’ district,’the’ability’you’have’to’expand’your’skills’to’a’further’field’is’quite’ commendable.’ Your’efforts’toward’the’web’document,’titled’ “Art and Wine with a Rose” ’ have’bee n’thoroughly’researched .’ ’ Said’efforts’are’quite’impressive;’h owever,’ your’external ’ document’appears’to’contain’ particular’aspects’could’undergo’some’ slight’ editing’for’improvement .’Presente d’to’you,’is’a’general’report’on ’ your’ business’communication’ document.’This’report’highlights’the’components’that’are’ strong,’as’well’as’the ’ components’ that’are’ still’ in’progress. ’ Purpose and Scope of the Document You’make’it’clear’that’your’ objective’is’to’teac h’adult’ art’ classes;’you’are’expanding’ your’ lessons’ to’an’ audience’far’older’than’the’ age’range ’ in’the’Grosse’ Pointe’ Public’ School’System.’ Stating’that’you’have’taught’in’the’school’system’for’25’years’was’a’ very’credible’piece’of’information’to’include’in’your’introduction:’not’only’does ’ this’ make’ the’audience’feel’as’though’they’know’you’on’a’more’personal’level,’they’can’ trust’that’art’is’a’subject’you’are’very’familiar’with.’ The’opening’quote’of’your’ homepage’is’certainly’one’of’the’most’brilliant’decisions’among’your’web’design’ process.’By’open ing’your’document’with’ “Have a fun night out with a few glasses of wine and walk away with an original painting,” ’ your’central’ selling’point’is’ introduced’and’you’intrigue’your’target’audience.’ ’ Overall,’the’ homepage’ had’to’ have’been’the’most’ effective’ component’ of’your’website .’ ’ Document Layout
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