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2.2.9 Practice: Complete Your AssignmentPracticeEnglish IV Sem 1Points Possible:30Name:Amber AstranDate:Evaluate and improve the rough draft essay titled "Punishments in Dante'sInferno" (see below).Strengthen the thesis, use quotes and summary inappropriate ways, and make use ofcommentary to back up your points. Improve the organization to fit your purpose, and edit thediction, syntax, and style to create a formal tone.To complete this assignment, you need to add, delete, rearrange, and clarify the text of thefollowing rough draft:A kid steals a pack of gum. Obviously, he should besentenced to death! Most people want to live in a justworld where punishments fit crimes. The poet Dantewanted that. As a Christian during the Middle Ages, heheld strong beliefs about fairness. He believed that peoplewho committed big and small crimes in life would bepunished in the afterlife. His beliefs seem kind of crazynow — sort of like sentencing a kid to death for a pack of
gum — but Dante believed in the messed-up standards ofthe Middle Ages. What seemed like justice to him seemslike injustice to us, but he didn't mean it that way. I believetheInfernoshows dead people getting punished in avariety of awful ways Dante thought were good.I think the punishment for people who were either greedyor stingy in life is one way Dante shows the precise justiceof God from his perspective. The description of thepunishment for heretics is another example of Dante'sworldview. They're both super vivid, but one is kind offunny and the other is creepy. Early in Canto VII, Dantewrites of the "justice of God" for guilty souls in Hell. The