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Drew HohenwarterIntro to LiteratureEssay Revision Reflection21 September 2012The peer revision that we did with our essays in class was very helpful fordeveloping my essay. Having Troy and James review my essay assisted me greatly inidentifying obvious mistakes like grammatical errors and parts of the essay that neededto be worded differently. But the best part about having my classmates review my essaywas that they gave me their thoughts on the essay as a whole.The biggest part of my revision process involving restructuring my finalparagraph, which served mostly as a conclusion to my essay. In my rough draft of myessay I used this paragraph to connect Lotus to the notion of home and use color assymbolism in the book to do so. After James read my essay he commented that I hadn’ttalked about color throughout my essay and it seemed pretty out of place that itappeared in the last paragraph. After hearing him say this it was so obvious to me that
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HeatherSprong
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