BADM 4075 Assignment 8 - Suggestions The first...

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Suggestions The first recommendation I would make about the statement, is for GM to go in depth about being environmentally (following the list of awards) before going in depth about the financial benefit. Since the primary goal of the statement is about being socially responsible this should have taken precedence over the financial aspect even though mentioning both was a necessary step. Immediately following the list of awards, GM went on to write about how being environmentally friendly was also a financial benefit. While it was very important for GM to establish this as it did with a good direct sentence, it should have kept the focus more on being environmentally friendly for the start of the statement. It was good of GM to mention the importance of the global impact it was having, however this should have been done much sooner. Rather than being GM specific in the beginning, I believe that the statement should have opened up with a more
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