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Peer Review Checklist 1. Your name: ___Candace Graves_________________________________ 2. Partner’s name: _____Junlei Cai___________________________ 3. Title of paper you’re reading: “__Racial Dicrimination in Education Field_________” 4. Thesis: “Racial discrimination still exists in the education system, and we will solve or minimize this problem by taking some methods____” Needs work? _Y____Y/N If so, what? ___The thesis isn’t in the introduction__ 5. Introduction: catchy? _____Y__Y/N clear? ___Y______Y/N definition/background? ______Y_________Y/N 6. First Main Point: Clear? ____Y____Y/N Logical? ____Y____Y/N Evidence? a. Chronical Online Article quote b. US News online quote c. Interview with Ms. Tynes In-text parenthetical citations, APA or MLA style? __Y___Y/N Transitions? __Y______Y/N 7. Second Main Point: Clear? _____Y____Y/N Logical? _____Y___ Y/N Evidence? a. Barrow County News online quote b. It slows down the development of society c. Answers Online quote In-text parenthetical citations, APA or MLA style ___Y____Y/N
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Unformatted text preview: Transitions? _____Y____Y/N 8. Third Main Point: There were only to main paragraphs, unsure what the third main point is. Clear? _________Y/N Logical? _________Y/N Evidence? a. b. c. In-text parenthetical citations, APA or MLA style _______Y/N Transitions? _________Y/N 9. Opposition acknowledged? _____Y____Y/N Refuted? __Y_____Y/N 10. Conclusion? Conclusion was well thought out and written well. Very easily understood, and sums up the paper well. 11. # of pages? _____4______; more needed? __Y____Y/N 12. Reference Page- 6-8 Sources? __He has 5________Y/N Alphabetical order, last name: ___N____________Y/N APA or MLA Style? _____Y______Y/N 13. Final comments: (positive and constructive criticism both): Good paper I think that you should probably add some more to it and that you need to add a reference page. Your thoughts are good just try to add a little bit more information. Also needs a third main paragraph, or make the third main point more clear....
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  • Fall '13
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  • English, Parenthetical referencing, in-text parenthetical citations

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