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Unformatted text preview: Transitions? _____Y____Y/N 8. Third Main Point: There were only to main paragraphs, unsure what the third main point is. Clear? _________Y/N Logical? _________Y/N Evidence? a. b. c. In-text parenthetical citations, APA or MLA style _______Y/N Transitions? _________Y/N 9. Opposition acknowledged? _____Y____Y/N Refuted? __Y_____Y/N 10. Conclusion? Conclusion was well thought out and written well. Very easily understood, and sums up the paper well. 11. # of pages? _____4______; more needed? __Y____Y/N 12. Reference Page- 6-8 Sources? __He has 5________Y/N Alphabetical order, last name: ___N____________Y/N APA or MLA Style? _____Y______Y/N 13. Final comments: (positive and constructive criticism both): Good paper I think that you should probably add some more to it and that you need to add a reference page. Your thoughts are good just try to add a little bit more information. Also needs a third main paragraph, or make the third main point more clear....
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- Fall '13
- English, Parenthetical referencing, in-text parenthetical citations