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Shaping Form for paragraph: 1
Subclaim: Lennie is very forgetful.
Data sentence one:
For example, Lennie is forgetful when he has the mice in his pocket and when he went to pet them they
bit his finger. “Lennie picked up the dead mouse and looked at it with a sad face. When they bit him he
pinched them, and by doing that he crushed their heads”
Commentary x 2:
This shows that he’s not only forgetful but also absent-minded. This further indicates that or This is
important because He is unaware of what he's doing sometimes until he has done it.
Data sentence two:
In addition, is how Lennie is forgetful is when he grabbed Curley's hand and crushed it. “ Curley’s fist was
swinging when Lennie reached for it. Lennie squeezed on until George came running in shouting ‘let go’.
The next moment Curley was on the ground wailing while he held his crushed hand”
Commentary x 2:
This shows that Lennie is just unaware of what he usually does or he just doesn’t realize it. This further