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Unformatted text preview: What is the strongest aspect of the paper? The strongest part of the paper is probably the body paragraphs, however after I revise my thesis the body paragraphs will need more work too. What is weakest part of the paper? What kind of feedback do you want? The thesis statement still seems very weak, and the conclusion also needs a lot of work. I am looking for help specifying the thesis, and making the conclusion more interesting and better worded....
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