Peer Review of a Classmate’s First Draft of a Rhetorical Analysis of a Public Document.docx

Michael caught my attention fast with just the

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Michael caught my attention fast with just the introduction, he made the whole essay interesting by providing true facts from the document. Please identify the writer’s thesis and quote it in the box below. The Center for Disease Control and Prevention website utilizes Rhetorical appeal in multiple aspects of their page, from page one to all the links that are provided for self-evaluation of the disorder of ADD /ADHD. How effectively do the paragraphs develop the topic sentence and advance the essay’s ideas? He did good transitioning from one paragraph to another, theres is room for improvement on them. How effectively does the conclusion provide a strong, satisfying ending, not a mere summary of the essay? The conclusion was my favorite he providing plenty of facts from the document in the essay. He made his point very clear over what he was talking about. Format How closely does the paper follow GCU formatting style? Is it double-spaced in 12 pt. Times New Roman font? Does it have 1" margins? Does it use headers (page numbers using appropriate header function)? Does it have a proper heading (with student’s name, date, course, and instructor’s name)? Yes No He had a good heading and 5 paragraphs.
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Are all information, quotations, and borrowed ideas cited in parenthetical GCU format? Yes No excellent job putting the links into the paragraphs. Are all sources listed on the references page in GCU format ? Yes No As far as I remember professor asked us to use 2 other sources and I am only seeing 2 in your reference page, but other than that everything else was well done.
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