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The anti soccer lobby believes in the words of usa

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campaigns against it. The anti-soccer lobby believes, in the words of USA Today’s Tom Weir, “that hating soccer is more American than apple pie, driving a pickup, or spending Saturday afternoons channel surfing with the remote control.” (Foer 16) The military will continue to influence the differences and integrations for the migration of popular cultures and the effectiveness for globalization. Communities with diverse cultures have the greater percentage for influencing American and other countries music, fashion, food, movies, TV, and the markets for global consumerism. Americans have repackaged culture products that are [Writing suggestion: rewrite the sentence to remove "that are"] received [The passive voice is a form of "be" (are) and a participle (received). Over-use of the passive voice can make paragraphs officious and tedious to read. Prefer the active voice. For example, passive voice = The paper was completed on time. Active voice = the student completed the paper on time. See Grammar
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Lingenfelter 3 & Writing Guides > Active & passive voice in doc sharing] and then [consider removing "then"] transmit the product to the rest of the nations, and do so more dazzlingly than the other countries. American history as a military of immigrants will teach us [Use "we," "us," or "our" to mean yourself and coauthors, not general humanity (or yourself and the reader)] to synthesize and incorporate the culture and popular expressions of a wide range of nationalities and ethnicities. Communities are the consumers of American intellectual and artistic influences par excellence. Ferla makes the same connection as the military is connected [Passive voice ] in these countries mentioned, “The globalization of popular culture and its many and varied effects around the world. Frequently, this process has been driven and dominated by developed countries and their transnational companies. However, the peoples of Africa, Asia, Latin America, and the Caribbean have also appropriated and transformed European and North American cultural forms, infusing them with their own cultures and concerns.” [Move the period to follow the citation] (Ferla 6) The combination of interracial relationships and the open-minded families collectively joined through communities will take on new forms for understanding the effects for popular culture submission.
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