Shivering and hoping I didnt just make a huge mistake All I was thinking was

Shivering and hoping i didnt just make a huge mistake

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Shivering and hoping I didn’t just make a huge mistake. All I was thinking was hoping everybody I was close with did not blame themselves because, it wasn’t them. It was me, I chose this.
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I like the tension at the end of the story Faith. Nicely done. I hope something happens to break the thought process that is starting… Killing me with the uncapitalized i’s in the first part. You have a 34/40. Short Story Rubric 36-40 32-35 28-31 0-27 Student has a clear character encountering a situation and entering into a conflict that leads to a resolution in a sophisticated manner. The conventions are perfect and the story exceeds the minimal requirements substantially. Student has a character encountering a situation and entering into a conflict that leads to a resolution in a clear manner. The conventions are near perfect and the story exceeds the minimal requirements. Student has a character encountering a situation and hopefully entering a conflict that may or may not lead to a resolution. There are multiple errors in conventions and the story is barely meets or is close to the requirements. Student creates a story that is confusing and not clearly developed. There are multiple errors in conventions and the story is barely meets or does not meet the requirements.
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