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hours after the group left. Even then I did not see all I wanted to This version reduces the original eleven clauses to four and condenses the 106-word sentence to thirty-one words in two sentences. 3.2 ECONOMY The other requirement to achieve an effective sentence is economy. Economy is a relation between the number of words used and the amount of meaning they convey. A sentence is not economical because it is short or wordy because it is long. The focus is not the number of words but the amount of information they convey. Consider the following two statements. WORDY:I should like to make it entirely clear to one and all that neither I nor any of my associates or fellow-workers had anything at all to do in any way, shape, or form with this illicit and legally unjustifiable act that has been committed. IMPROVED: I want to make it clear to everyone that neither I nor any of my associates had anything to do with this illegal act. The first version takes forty-six words to say what is more clearly said at the second version in twenty-four. The extra words do not add any significant information; they merely make reading more difficult and annoy the reader by useless repetition of the same idea in different words. WORDINESSThe other failure in the achievement of effective sentence is wordiness. Wordiness is using a large number of unnecessary words. A wordy writer uses more words than are necessary to convey his meaning. The weight of unnecessary words also tends to obscure meaning. WORDY: He attacks the practice of making a profitable business out of college athletics from the stand point that it has detrimental and harmful influence on the BDU, ENGLISH DEPARTMENT 50
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SOPHMORE ENGLISH UNIT 2: SENTENCE COMBINATION college students and, to a certain degree and extent, on the colleges and universities themselves. IMPROVED: He attacks commercialization of college athletics harmful to the students, and even to the university themselves.The common methods to achieve economyGood writing says things in as few words as possible without losing clarity or completeness. It makes every word count. Then, you can often make your writing more direct and economical. Here we are considering wordiness within a sentence. The two most common methods are: 1.Cutting out unnecessary words within a body of a sentence 2.Substituting more economical expressions for wordy ones 1. Cutting out unnecessary words within the body of a sentenceExamples: * As we walkedin the direction of home, I feltas if I had never been happier. - As we walked home, I felt I had never been happier. * The task of every English teacher is to helpdevelop in their studentsthe ability tounderstand and communicate in their native language. - The task of every English teacher is to help students to communicate in their native language. * The truthof the matter is, to call a spade a spade, that he is afraid of her. - The truth is that he is afraid of her.2. Substituting more economical expressions for wordy ones

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