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I hope you will considering 10 my suggestion to redesign the new generation of monitors. Best regards, Chelsea Lymon Marketing Manager 107 © CPBE 2019
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Now look at the sentences below. They contain the same 10 errors, but in a different order. Find and correct the errors. The answers are on the following page. a) Dear Ms Chelsea Lymon b) There would be a fire drill exercise at 10.20 on 28 February. c) If you have $10m, how would you invest it? d) The shape and material both looks good, but perhaps we could think again about the choice of colour? e) An early reply should be greatly appreciated. f) We are planning on produce the toys in Dongguan. g) Thanks for your help about the market report. h) This year’s profits will be a little more high than last year’s. i) When you worked for Far East Enterprises. They were just a local firm. j) Please contact with me if you need any further information 108 © CPBE 2019
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ANSWERS: a) Dear Chelsea / Dear Ms Lymon b) There will be a fire drill exercise at 10.20 on 28 February. c) If you had $10m, how would you invest it? d) The shape and material both look good, but perhaps we could think again about the choice of colour? e) An early reply would be greatly appreciated. f) We are planning to produce the toys in Dongguan. g) Thanks for your help with the market report. h) This year’s profits will be a little higher than last year’s. i) When you worked for Far East Enterprises, they were just a local firm. j) Please contact me if you need any further information 109 © CPBE 2019
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2 Proofreading Look again at this sample report which also appears on p.49. In this version, there is ONE grammatical error in most of (but not all) lines 1-24 . How many can you find? You can check your answers by referring to the original text on p.49. Feasibility report on cooperation with Samos Introduction 1) The aim of this report to assess the feasibility of an agreement with 2) Samos, the well-known Korean manufacturer of smartphones. They 3) had contacted us and asked about the possibility of a cooperation 4) agreement. We would adapt our business app for their phones and it 5) could be pre-installed for customers. Test show that their phones are 6) reliable and are very popular with our target marketing. 7) This report will look at: 8) - the hardware manufacturer and their equipments 9) - the app that could be use on their mobile phones 10) - the advantages of work together 11) - recommendations for action. Findings 12) Samos had been developing mobile devices for thirty-five years. 13) In the last five years they focus on more expensive 14) smartphones for business people. These have been very success: 15) At present one in four smartphones in the business market a 16) Samos. 17) Our new ‘Executive Organizer’ Android app have a lot of attractive 18) features for travelling business people and is selling very good.
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