Brazil gave a jet deal to a company in Saab instead of an American company shortly after the NSA leaks. 2. Diplomatic relations became frayed after NSA documents showed which foreign leaders they were currently spying on as seen by the Chancellor of Germany B. Concluding Sentence: Overall, the relationships we had with foreign nations were frayed dramatically once NSA documents showed how and which countries they were spying on; it will undoubtedly take more than a few years to repair foreign relations and to gain back the trust of essentially the whole world. III. Blueprint Example 2 A. NSA surveillance in America 1. Tech companies became more serious in the privacy of their users and big tech giants, such as Apple, have gone over court over the disclosure of individual's privacy 2. A house bill was passed which stopped the bulk collection of users data and a federal judge ruled the NSA’s actions as unconstitutional B. Concluding Sentence: The knowledge that the NSA could tap into anyone's mobile device sparked a movement which led to the higher protection of individuals privacy, yet, despite being thankful for the information provided by Snowden, many Americans are still oblivious of his role in getting the mentioned bills and laws passed.
Blueprint Example 3 IV. Conclusion A. Restate Thesis (including transition): This particular conversation would be have been made indefinitely easier if Snowden had simply revealed the NSA spying on its own country, Snowden would have been hailed as a national hero, however the NSA leaks he also revealed contained information detrimental to many soldiers stationed offshore, and but also detrimental to our foreign relations. Thus, only by seeing the effects his actions has caused, can one truly judge Snowden's momentous decision B. Summarize Blueprint: C. General Thought About Topic (optional):