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Major points are stated clearly; are supported by specific details, examples, or analysis; and are organized logically. The introduction provides sufficient background on the topic and previews major points. The conclusion is logical, flows from the body of the paper, and reviews the major points. Readability and Style 15 Points Points Earned 15/15
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Additional Comments: Paragraph transitions are present, logical, and maintain the flow throughout the paper. Yes Yes – very good! yes The tone is appropriate to the content and assignment. Sentences are complete, clear, and concise. Sentences are well constructed, strong, and varied. Sentence transitions are present and maintain the flow of thought. Mechanics 15 Points Points Earned 12/15 Additional Comments: The paper, including the title page, reference page, tables, and appendixes, follows APA formatting guidelines. Great formatting but title page is not APA No Yes Yes Yes Citations of original works within the body of the paper follow APA guidelines. The paper is laid out with effective use of headings, font styles, and white space.
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Rules of grammar, usage, and punctuation are followed. Spelling is correct. Total 80 Points Points Earned 77/80 Overall Comments: Outstanding Jessie!! Great way to start the term. Good points: -Good APA formatting (Except for title page, looks great but not APA format) -Good understanding of the assignment -Good word count -Good example Thing you need to work on: - In text citations -Title page (see attached file) Keep up the good work! -JK In-Text Citation Sample 1 The Web site for the National Osteoporosis Foundation (2004) has many interesting facts about this debilitating disease. Sample 2 Osteoporosis is a highly preventable disease (National Osteoporosis Foundation, 2004). Sample 3 The National Osteoporosis Foundation (2004) stated, “Eighty persons of those affected by osteoporosis are women” (¶ 1). Reference Page Citation National Osteoporosis Foundation. (2004). Fast facts. Retrieved October 15, 2004,
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