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Write Point feedback. From what I found out about my write point feedback is that I tend to use “when it comes to” a lot and I need to find a better way of using words to start my sentences off with betters words. And I should not start a sentence with a conjunction. Plagiarism checker. From what I gathered from the plagiarism checker is that I had some things that seemed to have a bit of plagiarism in them 7% but form what I found out that I it can happen from just the way you write your sentences and not know that you did. I thought I did really well at putting the information that I found into my own words so that I wasn’t copying my research from someone else. Welcome to WritePoint, the automated review system that recognizes errors most commonly made by university students in academic essays. The system embeds comments into your paper and suggests possible changes in grammar and style. Please evaluate each comment carefully to ensure that the suggested change is appropriate for your paper, but remember that your instructor's preferences for style and format prevail. You will also need to review your own citations and references since WritePoint capability in this area is limited. Thank you for using WritePoint. Online Schooling vs. Traditional Schooling The difference between online and traditional schooling for today’s college students, concerning policies, advantages vs. disadvantages, and the learning style. With the growing demand in online schooling the student must consider what’s going to work for them the best and the advantages and disadvantages of online vs. traditional collage.
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There are things that should be thought about when a person is thinking about what type of schooling that would best benefit there life style. What is the type of schedules that works best for a full time student and what works with a full time job as well? [Writing suggestion: Unless in a quote or a title, avoid rhetorical questions in academic writing. A good idea is to provide answers, not questions] Concerning traditional classes you have a set schedule that must be followed and pass all assignments in on time. Traditional schooling might not be the best thing of a full time working parent because it does not work best with their schedule that they may have. Concerning online schooling the student sets their own schedule so that they can work around there everything that’s going on in their day-to-day lives. Online schooling can and will [Wordiness and redundant: if something "will," surely it "can"] most likely make it easier for the full time working family with the flexible hours that school work can be done in. There are also things that one must consider when looking into traditional schooling and what there dress codes are and what must be followed as a typical traditional student. Some places require uniform’s that there students have to wear to school every day in which can be a hassle to have to make sure that they are clean or where they are. Some schooling just requires the student to wear
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  • Spring '10
  • WILLIAMS
  • Virtual learning environment, schooling, online schooling, traditional schooling

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