One way this use of evidence could be improved is

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. One way this use of evidence could be improved is: [list evidence correction suggestion from you or your small group debrief here] . By adding or improving the author’s evidence the reader would have left feeling/thinking [insert what you think the reader could have thought or felt if the evidence had changed here] . This would have helped convince more people to get behind your claim that [insert argumentative claim article was trying to convince people of here] . Additionally, your author did/did not use a counterclaim in their article. The counterclaim I am referring to is “[ insert counterclaim example from article] .” OR The area where I think a counterclaim could have gone is [insert quote from article where a counterclaim should be inserted] .” This counterclaim/ lack of a counterclaim is not as effective at it could have been because [insert why you think their counterclaim was not as strong as it could have been]. Here is what I think your author should have done instead: [insert correction suggestion from you or your small group] . This would have {insert effect on audience this would have had] .
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  • Fall '19
  • insert type of evidence, Chantel Woodard

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