Remember that you must deliver the message of the paragraph above all else; the assignment is to learn to recognize and transmit essential information without waste. "He just up and quit," can be "He just quit." "The way I see it, we could do without some of those tools" could be, "Obviously we need fewer tools."BEGIN YOUR ASSIGNMENT ON THE NEXT PAGE
ASSIGNMENT INSTRUCTIONS:Using the guidelines above, revise the following examples. Type your revision beneath each passage.1. Home Depot offers many promotions to draw customers into their stores. A few of them are: twelve-month, no-interest payment plans, ten to twenty percent off products andinstallations, gift cards, and online free gift drawings. Home Depot has excellent advertisement in all areas of advertisement media, such as, television, radio, and billboards, the web, as well as a Home Depot race car. Home Depot offers several appliances throughout their stores that are energy efficient that have a bright green E-plus logo on many of their products.2. This idea of teams’ actually working at lower rates of productivity and efficiency is not a new concept. Research onthis topic has been done dating back to the 1970s and has
proved these theories to actually exist in real life settings. Psychology research has proven that when the number of people within a team rises, then the overall effort of the teamalso rises, but the effort from each individual team member decreases. This theory is referred to as the Ringelman Effect and has been a key in diagnosing problems that exist within team settings.
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