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Comment by Author: While this paragraph contains some great info, it doesn’t really fall in line with the nature of the assignment in analyzing the why/how the author wrote the paper. Instead of discussing what he did successfully or neglected to include, you will want to be more general in communicating this. Did he not include enough information? Was it too technical for most people to read? If he was missing something, what could he have added in to be more beneficial to the reader? Have a small discussion on this. For example – where you point out what was neglected – how will this info influence the buyer? Is it necessary info to have, or is it just ‘bonus’ to help them delve deeper into the decision making process? Think about his intended audience when answering these questions too! By and large, I don't believe that the writer had the option to accomplish the objective or rather induce his perusers on what charger to purchase. He essentially portrayed how both the super and turbochargers work, their attributes, points of interest, detriments, and what makes them distinctive yet other than that he didn't give any substance to help anybody stuck on the two in settling on a choice. The article has no
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proof or reality that would persuade somebody to purchase supercharger rather than a turbocharger and the other way around. On the off chance that the objective was to help one settle on a decision between the two then the contention totally fizzled. Sanjay closes his article with reasons why both of the frameworks is fundamental. This is the place the article self-destructs. Rather than finishing up with some solid actualities and comments that would assist somebody with making up their psyche on what framework they'll get, it carries one to a similar point the person was toward the start of the article. Not realizing which course to take, turbo or supercharger. With everything taken into account, it was a useful and fascinating article.Works Comment by Author: A comma is needed here as well before the conjunction. Comment by Author: Delete word Comment by Author: Be sure that you are staying away from summarizing the article. You won’t follow the order of the article like you are doing a review/summary. Instead, you are taking different components to examine and discuss. Comment by Author: For the conclusion, you will want to make your final argument on the successfulness of the writer of the article.
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Works Cited Jaaskelainen, Hannu & Khair, Magdi. Turbocharger Fundamentals. DieselNet . Retrieved from , 2017 Salomon, Sanjay. Supercharger vs. Turbocharger. U.S.News . Retrieved from - blog/2016/10/supercharger-vs-turbocharger , 2016. Harris, William. How Superchargers Work. Auto . Retrieved from
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  • Fall '17
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  • Gas compressor, Turbocharger, Supercharger, Sanjay Salomon

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