friendships that have lasted throughout the stages of my life” (2013, para.2). She is really trying to helpthe reader understand how her life has turned out because of soccer. If there was more of the actualgame incorporated into her story, the reading audience will think of her more as a soccer player; insteadof a person who played soccer. I believe this literary element is called considering the audience. Sheuses this element very well, I believe, because she is able to understand that the audience may think thisis more of a soccer essay; instead of an essay on her life, because of soccer. I will really try toincoroporate this literary element into my essay. Successfully considering the audience will ensure thatwhoever is reading the essay, will at least enjoy reading it. In my essay of moving to Las Vegas, I candefinitely understand why the audience will want to have a clear view of how I was feeling, or what Iwas thinking. I belive this will definitely improve my writing technique.
Running head: Paraphrasing Soccer EssayConnell, C.M. & Sole, K. (2013). Essentials of College Writing Second Edition. Bridgepoint EducationIncAshford Writing Center ()
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