The writer begins his paragraphs with the topic sentences which clearly

The writer begins his paragraphs with the topic

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of transition and clearly describes what that paragraph is about? The writer begins his paragraphs with the topic sentences which clearly describes what the rest of the paragraph is about. He needs to add some transitional words in his essay. Does the writer introduce all quotes with an intro phrase? Does the writer follow each quote with a sentence of their own words that ties it into the paper? The writer hasn’t used any quotes in his essay yet, so he probably needs to work on it. How does this writer conclude? With a call to action, a re-statement of their thesis in new words, a quote, or a call back to the beginning of the paper? The writer concludes with a re-statement of his thesis in new words. What is one thing the writer could do to make this paper better? What is one thing that is working in the paper so far? The writer needs to add some quotes and examples of success (from attending college). Additionally, he should add something related to wages that how college education helps you earn better. Other than that, the paper is very well-written especially the introductory paragraph.
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  • Spring '12
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