Part time full training provided on the companies

Part-time
• Full training provided on the companies’ techniques
• Complete structured lessons and classes provided
• Must be interested in field, advanced hourly salary for
degree (CSCS within 6 months of hire)
• What would you be looking for?

Critique the Email
Hi my name is XXX. I am emailing you in regards to your ad. I'm
wondering if the position is still available? I've just ended my
professional baseball career of 7 years. I am looking to get into training
athletes. I am currently seeking a degree in exercise and wellness from
Arizona State. I have been doing speed drills and functional lifting for
many years With various high level trainers. I have spent time at API. I
know right now I'm lacking in the school requirements but I feel that
school can’t teach what I have experienced. What type of certification
holds the most weight in personal training?
I saw your posting on and decided it would be a good opportunity. I
have attached my resume and look forward to hearing back from you.
Thank you for your time,

Another Example
Hello,
I was looking at the Velocity Sport Performance website and I
came across a link stating that there is an opening for a
performance coach. Tell me about the job. Attached is my
resume.
Thanks for your assistance,

Example
• To Whom it may concern,
I saw your ad for the position of performance coach. I
have extensive knowledge and experience in sports
performance and have always wanted to work with athletes. I
will be graduating this semester with my degree in marketing.
Having played high school football, I know the dedication it
takes to become a good athlete. I always worked to become the
biggest and strongest person and want to share with you my
knowledge. I know my programs will make a difference.

Email
After seeing your job posting for the sports performance coach, I reviewed your
biography and found that I utilized many of your published studies as references
for my research papers in school. I would welcome an opportunity to work and
learn from you and your staff in a position that I would really enjoy.
Speed and strength training have been a passion of mine since I began utilizing
performance training drills in 7 th grade. Our club softball team had a sports
performance coach and I know the impact a good coach can have on a team’s
abilities. I have studied speed and strength training for many years as a hobby
and have never stopped training myself like an athlete.
I started a Master’s program in Exercise Science with a specialty in Performance
Enhancement a year ago and I am working as an independent personal trainer to
help pay for my schooling. Over the years, I have had the opportunity to train
athletes as a hobby, mainly working with children at the high school track. I am
comfortable working with athletes of all ages and ability level.