Part-time • Full training provided on the companies’ techniques • Complete structured lessons and classes provided • Must be interested in field, advanced hourly salary for degree (CSCS within 6 months of hire) • What would you be looking for?
Critique the Email Hi my name is XXX. I am emailing you in regards to your ad. I'm wondering if the position is still available? I've just ended my professional baseball career of 7 years. I am looking to get into training athletes. I am currently seeking a degree in exercise and wellness from Arizona State. I have been doing speed drills and functional lifting for many years With various high level trainers. I have spent time at API. I know right now I'm lacking in the school requirements but I feel that school can’t teach what I have experienced. What type of certification holds the most weight in personal training? I saw your posting on and decided it would be a good opportunity. I have attached my resume and look forward to hearing back from you. Thank you for your time,
Another Example Hello, I was looking at the Velocity Sport Performance website and I came across a link stating that there is an opening for a performance coach. Tell me about the job. Attached is my resume. Thanks for your assistance,
Example • To Whom it may concern, I saw your ad for the position of performance coach. I have extensive knowledge and experience in sports performance and have always wanted to work with athletes. I will be graduating this semester with my degree in marketing. Having played high school football, I know the dedication it takes to become a good athlete. I always worked to become the biggest and strongest person and want to share with you my knowledge. I know my programs will make a difference.
Email After seeing your job posting for the sports performance coach, I reviewed your biography and found that I utilized many of your published studies as references for my research papers in school. I would welcome an opportunity to work and learn from you and your staff in a position that I would really enjoy. Speed and strength training have been a passion of mine since I began utilizing performance training drills in 7 th grade. Our club softball team had a sports performance coach and I know the impact a good coach can have on a team’s abilities. I have studied speed and strength training for many years as a hobby and have never stopped training myself like an athlete. I started a Master’s program in Exercise Science with a specialty in Performance Enhancement a year ago and I am working as an independent personal trainer to help pay for my schooling. Over the years, I have had the opportunity to train athletes as a hobby, mainly working with children at the high school track. I am comfortable working with athletes of all ages and ability level.
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